I really like how you write music for your girlfriend and i m sure she does too, lol. I like how the emotion shows through in this song.
Thanks for the positive review (:
I love the use of double bass in this one, it really seems like a song that could be made in to an awesome screamo version with some guitar. Also I like the drum beat that opens it too, the beat reminds me of a beat in uncle by MSI. And your lyrics seem really well put together.
To be honest i really wanted to scream in this one lol but i had strained my vocals a bit prior to singing this so i was giving myself a well needed rest haha and If only i knew a guitarist! I'd love to add guitars in my work, but unfortunately i myself cant play one... ): Thanks for the positive review though!
I liked it
i like the sounds of the synths you used, definitely has that good chiptune sound to it, i feel it could use a little more though. i would like to know what you use to write your music. have you heard of sabrepulse?
I agree with using some more in this song, it sounds a bit dry to me myself. I write all my music with FL Studio, its a really simple great program with enormous potential for very professional sounding songs (: and indeed i have heard of Sabrepulse I listen to him all the time!
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